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The short story is a famously difficult form. The young writer
is routinely warned: This is much harder than it looks.
Which is fair enough. Tales resist compression. We tend, as a
species (and surely writers especially) to inefficiency. And yet,
difficult and unnatural as it may be, the short story offers a
singular freedom. Let me dwell, speaking as a writer, and only
for a moment, on this under-celebrated quality. It cannot be denied
that the conception and writing of a novel, even in rough first
draft, is an undertaking that exceeds in scope what is possible
to accomplish in any single period of wakefulness. (I exclude
24-hour novel-writing contests as well as On the Road and
other writing projects involving the use of benzedrine.) Short
stories, by contrast, may be conceived and, if not drafted, then
mentally framed, all in the instant. In the unpredictable internal
silences that suspend the ordinary day. In the time it takes to
cross town by bus when traffic is slowed by a hail storm. In the
time it takes to finish a bowl of katsu don when a task
is being avoided. In the time it takes your heartbeat to slow
after hearing bad news by phone. These moments, wherein the self
is momentarily blank, are sometimes all that is required to bring
a short story to life. Salman Rushdie has written: “literature
is the art least subject to external control, because it is made
in private.” He was speaking, quite rightly, about the power and
freedom of the novel. The same might be said of the short story,
only more so in the sense that, while it too comes to life in
private, it may well evade even your own controls.
 
When
you are writing a short story, falling into a new place can feel
like falling down a well. The first time it happens by accident.
You curse the dark. Curse the lost hours you’ll have to spend,
scrambling out. But after a while you realize that falling down
a well may be precisely how you find the best material.
It
may be what you’re supposed to be doing.
It
may, in fact, be your profession.
Although
it may be tempting to write a short-story plan, any plan I have
ever written has had to be thrown out in favour of something else
that arrives on its own. This can, of course, be frustrating.
After all, many story ideas come with a shiver of excitement.
Then one works diligently, for days, for weeks, hammering out
drafts. If a story puts out new shoots, it can be tempting to
snap them off.
But
by adhering too closely to what a story should be doing, you could
end up stuck: obsessively re-working the first paragraph, for
instance, or opening the whole story file with dread. After a
while, the thing that glimmered in its Platonic Form could lie
across your desk like a strange (and, naturally, unwanted) corpse.
Writing
short stories is a craft — but one you do with half-shut eyes.
Rather than being hard work, or only hard work, it is more like
trapping chipmunks (something my son did while camping — using
a net, a pot and some string). You have to lie in wait and be
patient. You have to pretend to be doing something else.
Jorge
Luis Borges describes this process in his brilliant short story,
“The Circular Ruins.” In it, a magician withdraws into the jungle,
his goal being to dream a man into existence. The magician dreams
meticulously — picturing the man’s sallow face and rebellious
character, even imagining his reluctance to exist. But still the
dreamed-of man won’t materialize. Months go by, then years (during
which the magician forgets how to dream, then remembers again).
Then one night the magician sees a heart floating above him. Blood
flows through the pulmonary artery. It beats . . .
Borges’
story describes the complexities of short-story writing perfectly.
The writer starts by dreaming the outer aspects —that may be all
that he can do. But if he is lucky, and vigilant —and perhaps
even slightly forgetful — one day a heart may appear on its own.

| When
I was writing my first novel, Homer in Flight, I imagined
that my apprenticeship was complete and that I would no longer
write short stories. A collection of stories had just been
published. The stories were written quickly, a benefit, I
believe, of my relocation from Trinidad to New Brunswick.
I had arrived in fall, and was immediately overwhelmed by
scenes I had previously only witnessed in National Geographic
magazines. Everything was fresh and new and peculiar. I was
curious and confused; the book of stories was written in four
months. When I was writing my first novel, Homer in Flight,
I imagined that my apprenticeship was complete and that I
would no longer write short stories. A collection of stories
had just been published. The stories were written quickly,
a benefit, I believe, of my relocation from Trinidad to New
Brunswick. I had arrived in fall, and was immediately overwhelmed
by scenes I had previously only witnessed in National Geographic
magazines. Everything was fresh and new and peculiar. I was
curious and confused; the book of stories was written in four
months. |
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A
short story, requiring only a minor commitment, is easy to write.
It comes complete with a beginning and a conclusion, with defined
characters, and a reliable landscape. It’s completed in a few
nights, too short a period for doubts, concerns, and significant
revision. It’s usually locked onto a critical event, some momentous
event in a person’s life. For me, there are set priorities; characterization
is usually more important than setting, atmosphere more meaningful
than strict chronology. When I begin a short story, I know all
the little diversions the plot might take, all the tricks the
characters might try. One of the biggest differences to me, between
a short story and a novel, is that stories are sparked by recent
observations — a brazen courtship, the sly indifference of a salesperson,
the expression on a woman’s face as she recounts some act of betrayal,
an old immigrant struggling in his bulky winter clothing.
Recently,
I’ve started writing in a small coffee-shop in Ajax. The disparate
energy, the fragmented conversations sliced by laughter, helps
rather than hinders my concentration. I cannot really explain
this. Occasionally, I look up to gaze at the odd gestures of a
mismatched couple, or I listen to a surreptitious conversation,
and I think that versions of these hurried observations might
emerge in a short story in a few months, or in a novel, ten or
fifteen years later on.
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